here are some notes i wrote at one point or another, feedback and positive constructive criticism
would be appreciated, lets start with
Thicket
Through the thicket, pricked by wicked thornspushing through nature, entire colonies crushed
underneath each footfall, brushing away
a curious bumblebee, feeling strong with wonderment
no idea where Im going, but no answer is wrong
across a bike path, staring at the vast skyline
seen beyond the treetops, aimlessly following
the symphony of sounds coming from the city
down onto asphalt, step on the cracks
where am I going? home I guess, but where's that?
I look around, a busy intersection,
the corner of reality and check, epiphany
I am home, home where my heart is, beating
down the walls, who needs them, inside out, freedom
released from the binds and constraints, breathing heavy
pawns all around, oblivious just, being pushed,
I stand unmoving
as if to protest the endless rush, I know what I am
its my defiance
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